Okay so Mainly Im putting this on here for opinion purposes I wrote this last week when I was gone camping so mainly Im looking for feed back I did a rough draft I was bored one night and just started writing so I would love some feedback things you liked, things you would change different song title anything this is my first full song Im still working out the kinks in it but I thought hey why not get some feedback from you guys ^_^
Just For You
Layin' here tonight in that old bunkbed
thinking about your words that are singing in my head
You tell me you love me, how much you've missed me
Baby I dont know how anyone cant see
what you mean to me
Chorus
I'd jump out a airplane,climb up on that mountain
I'd face all those fears just to have you near
just so I could see that smile on your sweet face
ya and not for just anyone
no I'd do it just for you
Why just yesterday I biked two and a half miles
just to hear the sound of your sweet voice
the reception was bad
my mom and dad were mad as hell
but hey, I ment well I did it for you
Instrumental
Chorus x2
I'm here again all alone in this bed
thinking about all those things you said
I wanna go home
Oh but Im just too far from home
I'll dream about you tonight Im sure
just waiting for friday to come back home
I'll dream about all the things I would do
Just for you
1 comment:
it flowed very nicely
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